The Unforgotten First Love!


Deep inside my mind,There burns a part,
However old i grow,it continues to Stay.
The thoughts and memories,Still lies in my Heart,
However Far i go,even across the bay..!

What was true love, He made me feel,
Complete clueless of what actually it is.
I dint mind for him, even to kneel,
Gave myself completely and became all his!

Yet after all this,we just broke,
Feeling a bit bad, but still under control.
At the start, it gave me a big stroke..
But as time passed, I again began on the roll.

I met another Guy, probably better than you,
But i don't care that much, as much as i used to do.
He makes me feel like a princess, yet on mind its You,
I just cant forget you and that's so very true!

I don't love you anymore, But still can't forget you,
Because you were my first love and i can't forget you.
I have found a true love again so new,
Yet after all this , I'll continue to Remember YOU!

-Hiranmayee Bagwe

Comments

  1. Unknown19 April 2011 at 07:34

    u r a flirt re damn guud at woooin guys bato bato mei patofied 3 guys kewl

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  2. Abhishek CFCingh19 April 2011 at 07:45

    :) :) Nice

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  3. Hiranmayee19 April 2011 at 07:48

    @uddhav .. bhak .. what three guys re huh huh ???? talk in context of the poem :P

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  4. Hiranmayee19 April 2011 at 07:49

    @abhi .. :) >:)<

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  5. Unknown19 April 2011 at 07:50

    are srry na 2 baas kya tera profit hai na usme :P

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  6. Hiranmayee19 April 2011 at 07:53

    @uD... just tell me poem's good enuf or not.. profit wagera mein sambhal lungi :P

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  7. Unknown19 April 2011 at 07:55

    :P
    hai re acchi hai
    tnsn mat le

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  8. Hiranmayee19 April 2011 at 08:02

    hahha ...... so thankful for that precious awaited comment of urs! :P

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